Echoes of Life - Poetry in Color Forum
 


Poetry in Color Forum
Donation Goal For Private Hosting 2009
Help us get better hosting = make your donation today!
We Have Received $160 Towards Our Goal Of $750
21.33% Of Our Goal Has Been Reached




Welcome To The JPiC Community.




All times are GMT -4. The time now is 09:28 PM.
Official Forum Language Is English. Translate Below:
Click Here To Join JPiC Forum.

Kewl Stuff • JPiC Radio • Daily Horoscope • JPiC Arcade • Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read
 »» Echoes of Life
    JPiC Portal » Main Forum Index » Poetic Colours » Creative Traditional

Creative Traditional Celebrating Mother Earth? Seasonal, Traditional & Rhyming poetry posts here. (i.e. sonnet, limerick, haiku & all other poetic forms as seen in the Poetry-Defined section.)
A Haiku Collection.

Echoes of Life
this thread has 11 replies and has been viewed 272 times


Post New Thread  Reply
Page 1 of 2 1 2 >
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 07-03-2007, 01:23 AM
  post #1
Blue Mango Puppy :]

mangodroplet's Avatar

mangodroplet Is The Original Thread Starter
My Mood:
Real Name: Anna
Last Online: 11-28-2008 11:56 AM
A/S/L: 17
Join Date: Feb 16 2007
Posts: 935 Threads: 50
Member Blog Entries: 3
Thanks: 0
Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts
mangodroplet has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
Echoes of Life
So, i decided to actually make a Haiku Collection :]
It has a double meaning....I hope you find it :]


Echoes of Life

Emerging slowly,
masquerading in the light
that shines though the leaves.

Blossom releases
tumbles, careens down the cliff
Into the abyss.

Swift, raging river
carves its way though the Canyon
Starts with one small stream.

Wind howls though the night
causing trees to swiftly bend
If only still unseen.

Dying sunlight of
explosions of rich colors
In the twilight sky.



Signed By mangodroplet


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.
mangodroplet is offline   Reply With Quote
JPiC Forum Sponsor Links • This Forum is enhanced with content-revelevant advertisings...
JPiC Whole-Post Ad Policy
Whole-Post advertisings are shown only to JPiC Forum For Writers' Guests. Once successfully registered, such ads will not be shown. CLICK HERE to register your 100% FREE JPiC account today and become an active Member of our Community for Poets & Writers! CLICK HERE for advertising opportunities.

Old 07-03-2007, 01:32 AM
  post #2
VIP

erikestabrook's Avatar

My Mood:
Last Online: Today 06:47 PM
A/S/L: 24
Join Date: Aug 6 2006
Posts: 1,693 Threads: 218
Member Blog Entries: 3
Thanks: 21
Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts
Biography: I have my own website now erikestabrook.com, I hope you'll meet me there as well
erikestabrook has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
I say you stuck to the norm of haiku writing,
it was still impresive to see what you chose and it did go togther very well,
showed up every haiku I'd ever done at least to me



Signed By erikestabrook


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.
erikestabrook is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-03-2007, 11:39 PM
  post #3
Lover of Meanings

Jer4clarity's Avatar

Real Name: Jerry P. Quinn
Last Online: 08-03-2008 12:12 AM
Location: Yucca Valley, California
A/S/L: 57
Join Date: Jun 7 2007
Posts: 349 Threads: 34
Thanks: 0
Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts
Biography: I published my first work at the age of 23, "People Poetry", since then 10 or so publications
Jer4clarity has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
Anna,

I see beginning and endings with this haiku about life. And I'm sure it is true to form, however this is one of the forms I'm not to good at. My Fav;

Quote:
Wind howls though the night
causing trees to swiftly bend
If only still unseen.
I'm pretty sure this is what I said last night.

it didn't go through last night

Jerry



Signed By Jer4clarity


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.
Jer4clarity is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-04-2007, 12:13 AM
  post #4
Blue Mango Puppy :]

mangodroplet's Avatar

mangodroplet Is The Original Thread Starter
My Mood:
Real Name: Anna
Last Online: 11-28-2008 11:56 AM
A/S/L: 17
Join Date: Feb 16 2007
Posts: 935 Threads: 50
Member Blog Entries: 3
Thanks: 0
Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts
mangodroplet has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
Thanks erik!
Haha.....I'm sure our haikus will have a close fight for msJ to choose :]
hehe...i tried to stay right in the haiku style, since I want it in the site

Thanks jer :]
*huggles*
My fav haiku i the blossom one...But i'm glad you like my wind one :]
Thanks!



Signed By mangodroplet


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.
mangodroplet is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-04-2007, 09:31 AM
  post #5
Poetic Princess

Echoes's Avatar

Real Name: Lisa
Last Online: 12-02-2008 10:17 PM
Location: Ohio
A/S/L:
Join Date: Nov 7 2006
Posts: 233 Threads: 17
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Echoes has not received any JPiC Member Awards.
Echoes has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
stunning work, love the title

your talent shines



Signed By Echoes


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.
Echoes is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-04-2007, 11:19 AM
  post #6
Blue Mango Puppy :]

mangodroplet's Avatar

mangodroplet Is The Original Thread Starter
My Mood:
Real Name: Anna
Last Online: 11-28-2008 11:56 AM
A/S/L: 17
Join Date: Feb 16 2007
Posts: 935 Threads: 50
Member Blog Entries: 3
Thanks: 0
Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts
mangodroplet has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
Thanks Echoes :]
*huggles*



Signed By mangodroplet


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.
mangodroplet is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-04-2007, 12:02 PM
  post #7
VIP

erikestabrook's Avatar

My Mood:
Last Online: Today 06:47 PM
A/S/L: 24
Join Date: Aug 6 2006
Posts: 1,693 Threads: 218
Member Blog Entries: 3
Thanks: 21
Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts
Biography: I have my own website now erikestabrook.com, I hope you'll meet me there as well
erikestabrook has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
oh I couldn't resist saying your title is superb very sellable title



Signed By erikestabrook


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.
erikestabrook is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-06-2007, 12:14 AM
  post #8
Blue Mango Puppy :]

mangodroplet's Avatar

mangodroplet Is The Original Thread Starter
My Mood:
Real Name: Anna
Last Online: 11-28-2008 11:56 AM
A/S/L: 17
Join Date: Feb 16 2007
Posts: 935 Threads: 50
Member Blog Entries: 3
Thanks: 0
Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts
mangodroplet has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
Thanks!
It just came to me...
:]
hehe.
the best titles are the ones that you don't have to think hard before it comes to you :]]
thanks!



Signed By mangodroplet


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.
mangodroplet is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-06-2007, 12:57 AM
  post #9
Contributor