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Old 07-25-2007, 03:08 PM
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Enchanting Truth
Enchanting Truth
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The enchantment of her gentle kiss,
The seductive rapture of her bliss,
Her eyes flood with a verse of truth,
While her inner spirit most aloof.
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My Love for her, a tortuous maze,
My moment's gaze is but a phase.
My gaze stops scarce of thee,
As I absorb her mystery
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Clever word weaving and the flow
and rhyme is flawless. This is really lovely!
I enjoyed muchly, thanks!



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As I absorb her mystery
Bear this was exceptional in its brevity and movement of rhyme. Beautiful in sequence as well. That last line is superb! Loved it!

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Thank you so much Moonchild for your wonderful comment
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