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Old 05-30-2008, 02:51 AM
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English Blackbird

English blackbird. A foreign presence in my garden.
Indigenous your not, but are at home
Amongst Callistamon and Wattle, the Ti-tree and Banksia,
Claiming my half-acre yours to roam!

I should have been more heartless, when I found that bowl of mud
With blue green eggs and newborn chicks, but I melt to the young.
Watching parents, beak of worms, diligent and fearless,
In a springtime formal truce, where your melody is sung.

Now the battle is relentless and frustrating for my senses.
That yellow bill attacks, the percentage of my means,
With a free flight to my Currants, Raspberries and the Plum,
Gouging holes in juicy Figs, and just ripe Nectarines.

Merle. Why can't you be a migrant?
Leaving one late summer day,
Wing north south, east or west,
And completely lose your way!

For autumn skins of sugar, vitamins and juice,
Soft and tender, all ripening as you wait,
To become my jellies, jams, compotes, or that soothing autumn wine.
Grapes, Persimmons, Pears…I left to pick one day too late.

Among the scarecrows and the nets, bells and turning mirrors,
This urban bird soon disregards, so then becomes a shame.
For slug guns and baited rattraps, are temptations for an end,
To destroy the cunning Blackbird…but I'm not in the killing game.

Winters breath ekes cold and damp. Days are dark and short.
I rug up beside the open fire, for the winter seems so long,
I dine upon past seasons bounty, preserved in jars or freezer…
Joy is not first spring bud burst, but the English Blackbirds song.
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Old 05-30-2008, 06:40 PM
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Amazing! I love the message planted within like a seed. I agree it is better to share with the entire world even animals because without them we have no world. Only silence and the music of nature would be lost forever. Your piece really sings! Do Take A Bow!
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wonderful image of nature in autumn and of the countryside and blackbird Mountainpepper
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G'day Bear...
Thanks again for commenting. I must say the blackbird is becoming a serious pest in areas of Australia. However the two I have around my back door have become tame enough to enter the house of which I don't approve of. I just have to love these scallywags.

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G'day Tha-Emissary...
Thanks for reading and pasting your kind comments. You're dead right, we humans must learn to share or else we might end up being abosulute losers in natures battles.

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mmmmmmmm just love your accent your a beautiful lady aussie lovely name also
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I found this fascintating. Normally, a long poem will have me clicking for something else, but I hung in there and found a great poem. Fighting with the blackbird for the right of domain over your garden and losing, so cool, lol. That they've become tame enough to enter your house fascinates me as well.

A great poem about nature, the contest between animals and humans over food and the agelong struggle between farmer and scavenger, lol.

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G'day again butchiesmum...
Thanks for hanging in there...I'm sure you have a little feathered friend in your neighborhood who can test you out a little. In this poem I was very to the blackbird...I
still enjoy their song and cheekiness though.

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I fell asleep in my hammock, last summer, when I woke, I did it quietly because I wasn't alone. A flock of wild turkeys were about 50 feet away from me dusting themselves and their chicks underneath one of our bushes. Now I know why nothing grows under them, lol.

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