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Old 04-21-2007, 05:43 PM
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Evening Mountain Stroll
Evening Mountain Stroll
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The evening sunset is Nature's most wondrous sight,
Passing along a happiness that’s peaceful and tranquil,
As the lush green valley expands far and wide,
While the towering peaks soar on both sides.
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The sky is painted in rich colors,
Of orange, pink, and blue streaked with gold,
Such natural beauty can only be created by God,,
My spirit soars on eagles wings to the mountain peak.
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Looking down into the crystal blue waters of the lake,
A distorted portrait reflects on the surface of water,
I see the mountains green and brown color,
And all I can think of is being here with you
And wishing to take an evening mountain stroll
With you hand in mine.
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Old 05-17-2007, 06:31 AM
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It looks like you like nature? The last poem I read had reference to nature too. Again though, another beauty we have here. While reading this one, I was able to sketch it in my mind as a painting. Excellent work.
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and I am happy that you seen this beautiful painting in words , I do love nature
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How AWESOME is this!
You have indeed brought out Mother Nature's finest! As a nature lover myself. I would give this poem a 10 ! What a masterpiece!

You have give the image of pure delight! Thanks so very much for this piece. It is well worth a re-re- reread!

Superb! Thanks for sharing
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Thank you so very very much Sally for your fantastic comment I would love to have a mountain cabin and take a stroll through the mountains
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You are very welcome Bear

As I DO live in a mountain cabin. And have access to the entire mountain side to hike upon, right behind my dwelling.
So I can relate to your poem in great detail. Again Thanks for sharing.

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Nice poem, after reading it, I feel like having a stroll there too!
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thank you so much Kaya for your wonderful comment hope you enjoy your stroll
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