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Old 06-19-2007, 01:01 AM
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Evening Song
Evening Song

As the haloed alabaster moon illuminates the Earth
An evening song drifts through the countryside
Natures aria sails on a warm summer breeze
Listening to the sounds with excited anticipation
Of nature’s majestic beauty.
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At sunrise the skies turn to golden fire.
As the world treasures the last moments of sleep
While the sun slowly rises in the eastern heavens
And a sweet dew covers the wild flowers
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Gold and maroon echoes through the topaz sky
Virtually translucent in its sheer beauty.
It’s mystifying power stimulates life
With all it’s stratospheric miracles
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Extremely precious is the magnificent grace of the evening
Let this elegant bond between nature and life
Fill this world with peace and love
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Old 06-19-2007, 06:55 PM
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I like this one a lot. Out at sea and more recently working third shift at work, you get more in tune with those feelings.

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At sunrise the skies turn to golden fire.
As the world treasures the last moments of sleep
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Old 06-19-2007, 07:36 PM
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thanks alot Mike so happy you enjoy my works
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Your description is so vivid I see the sky in my minds-eye. I've read it more than once to capture your imagery. Awesome write!

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Extremely precious is the magnificent grace of the evening
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Fill this world with peace and love
Evermore
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Thank you so much Jerry for your fantastic comment
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Bear, this is a spectacular poem...and brings to mind all the beautiful sunsets I am going to be seeing in a couple weeks when I go to Belize Thanks for posting...so peaceful and enriching to the soul!

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thank you so much my sweet Nomad I hope that you have a great time at home and enjoy the beautiful beaches and sunsets and sunrises
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Dear Pooh Bear:
I can describe your poem in just one word..
BREATHTAKING!!!!!!!!!!!


A masterpiece in every sence of the word! I read it several times. Rated it excellent and then read it again. SUPERB write here bear. I absolutely LOVED every word of it!

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