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Old 11-13-2006, 07:59 PM
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EYES OF SORROW - Sedoka

EYES OF SORROW


eyes of sorrow
stare through broken glass window
nothing to ease hunger pangs

mother walks the streets
father never known, child waits
for rescue from this hell
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Dear Lisa,

Powerful imagery. One could actually envision those eyes. Some may claim those eyes as well. You have painted a spiritual of sorts that has such an everlasting feeling. Well done poet...well done. Thank you for sharing!!

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Howzit..This is very good..simple and powerful..If there was a thumbs up emoticon..I'd be using it now..
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true to form, don't see these much, you did a fantastic job
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