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Finding Him....Using the Villanelle Form
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Biography: I am retired and at present enjoying it very much. I taught schoolin N. Y. C.and owned a Catering Co
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Finding Him....Using the Villanelle Form
The first time I laid eyes upon his face.
He caught my eye, he was aware of me.
I turned away and looked out into space.
And then I began picking up my pace.
I watched him walk away too far to see.
The first time I laid eyes upon his face.
I was most fascinated by his grace.
If you had seen him sure you would agree.
I turned away and looked out into space.
To say hello was surely out of place.
The only thing that I could do was flee.
The first time I laid eyes upon his face.
The next day I looked for him, no trace.
I wish that I could be more calm, carefree.
I turned away and looked out into space.
I will find him, go search, if that's the case.
I recall his face, his little goatee.
The first time I laid eyes upon his face.
I turned away and looked out into space.
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Biography: I am retired and at present enjoying it very much. I taught schoolin N. Y. C.and owned a Catering Co
mrsmajor has not championed any arcade games.
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Thank you for your review and comments, I appreciate every word. More to come, I will have to think about that. It's a good idea. Thanks again for your nice words...
Biography: I am retired and at present enjoying it very much. I taught schoolin N. Y. C.and owned a Catering Co
mrsmajor has not championed any arcade games.
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Thank you for your review and comments. Looks as though I will have to find this mysterious man. I believe he is hiding from me, so it may take me some time to find him.
(smile). but I will.