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Old 07-10-2007, 12:30 PM
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This is an acrostic about an old bard from one of my old AD&D campaigns. It's not my best peice but I enjoyed writing the begining more then the end.
Oh and for those whom are unfamiliar with Bards they are storytellers that often use magic and sometimes use thievery to excite the audience.

Tethered by the wavering mind
He excites us with his dancing tongue
Encouraging fire with his breath
Flaming winds have been undone
If he could spark an interest
Running blazing melodies, unchained
Enticing burning embers in his songs
Singing of our adventurous lives
Prancing wildly ‘bout the campfire
Exploring the smoldering truth behind our verve
Akin to us only through there journey
Keeping connections forged by traveling
Even I could feel his light
Resolving our lives tragedies with memories spoken with flame.
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This is so good. I don't know how you can come up with this stuff so fast. Geez - It takes me hours to write something half this good, and you just write like you’re off on your first bicycle ride. I'm so proud of you.




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Yeah I agreewith JolieH, my teachers day poem took me 2 hours...
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This is so good. I don't know how you can come up with this stuff so fast. Geez - It takes me hours to write something half this good, and you just write like you’re off on your first bicycle ride. I'm so proud of you.
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Yeah I agreewith JolieH, my teachers day poem took me 2 hours...
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Heh, This one honestly took like ten minutes. But then again i rarely have creative ideas. So i loet them stire and settle in my head before they are acctually realized with words.

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great job...i have yet to try an acrostic with multiple words behind each letter...you did this one wonderfully...great read...loved it.



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I Love These
...they are harder than they look and yours flowed well...great job!



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This is superb and yes it flowed like water...smooth and cool, and I loved it. Great work!

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