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Old 07-24-2007, 10:55 PM
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GLASS LAKE
Creamy luminescence of
Moonbeams reflecting
On a glass lake
In the late evening hour
A hushed forest watches in awe
As the nocturnal awakening begins
Wandering through the shadow’s of night
Coming to life
Under God’s canopy
Of star filled skies
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Old 07-24-2007, 11:36 PM
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What a beautiful image. The forest creatures have much to appreciate with the coming of night.



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Danette,

A breathtaking poem filled with the splendor of your imagination. Awesome! My Fav:

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A hushed forest watches in awe
As the nocturnal awakening begins
Wandering through the shadow’s of night
Coming to life
Great read...thanks for sharing it!

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Creamy luminescence of
Moonbeams reflecting
On a glass lake
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Oh Danette ,

Where does one begin! I love, love, love, love, love this poem! The images are fresh and vibrant. Excellent write! The title caught my eye, and I knew I was in for a treat! My fav lines are highlighted above, and are just phenomenal!!!! I wish I could write this beautiful. This is the first poem I read today, and what a fantabulous poetic start. Thank you for writing this and sharing with us. An excellent rating from me!!!!! Wooohooo!!!! You got me all excited now, from tis lovely poem, lol!

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simply a beautiful painted image of the night sky and natures nocturnal creatures amazing penning Danette
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Hi Danette, I made this for you as I wanted to honor your stunning poem
"Glass Lake".
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Oh Kimberly!
You don't know how much that means to me.
You are such a thoughtful and sweet woman!
Love & hugs!
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Old 07-25-2007, 07:48 PM
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Thank you Bear
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