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Creative Traditional Celebrating Mother Earth? Seasonal, Traditional & Rhyming poetry posts here. (i.e. sonnet, limerick, haiku & all other poetic forms as seen in the Poetry-Defined section.)
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Old 07-21-2008, 08:35 PM
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good morning
good morning.

the lake takes a deep breath
as the morning fog lifts
and fades away.

birds rise to sing the world a tune,
calling upon the sun to emerge from behind the distant oak trees.

a light breeze cools and soothes.
calming.
helping the beads of dew on the freshly cut grass
dance in the early light.


a delicate splash.

the water shimmers and ripples
ever so slightly,
mocking the bold fluffy clouds
suspended far above.

glad to have awoken.
good morning.
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Nice work Seajay, For some reason this put me on the ocean actually looking back to shore hearing and watching all the wonder that early morning has to offer. It's probably because I think the absolute power of life on land is only appreciated truly when on the outside looking in.

Good morning to you also
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This is lovely, seajay! Reminds me what I'm supposed to be doing with this summer. I love waking up at the lake...or anyplace else in nature!
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Yikes! This is wonderful. It's got everything a lovely poem is supposed to have.
Interestingly you've use the repetition of sound not as end rhyme and it's so effective (lake,take,fade, etc.) that it puts a lot of end rhyme to shame.
Excellent job.
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