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Creative Traditional Celebrating Mother Earth? Seasonal, Traditional & Rhyming poetry posts here. (i.e. sonnet, limerick, haiku & all other poetic forms as seen in the Poetry-Defined section.)
My first Clarity Pyramid :D

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Old 06-10-2007, 03:18 PM
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Hope
HOPE
in wait
unchanging

A mother's cries sound
but within her wailing
comes belief that she will see

"The trust, the faith, the thought of good."


hehe.......the author of this style's first poem was also about hope!
wah! just found out...haha. coolio
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Old 06-10-2007, 03:32 PM
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Icon14 HOPE CAPTURED!!!!!!!!!!!!! By ANNA alias mangodroplet
First, for a first, this was brilliant! Not only did you follow, "to the tee" each aspect of the CP but you gave the word HOPE a life of its own with your spirit.

If it is true you are only fifteen then you are going places! Don't ever stop writing.

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HOPE
in wait
unchanging

A mother's cries sound
but within her wailing
comes belief that she will see

"The trust, the faith, the thought of good."
My CP HOPE is wanning in your presence!


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Old 06-10-2007, 03:42 PM
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WOW!
I am in awe of Mr. I-created-the-clarity-pyramid!
haha....thanks for the compliment!
I try....:]
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Thank you ever so much, it means MUCHO MAS!
You really really like it?
AHH!
i could die and be happy right now



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Hi, Anna, as I previously remarked, you have talent and much potential. I think the crux of this form is the second triplet, and you have tied all the pieces together really well with yours.

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wow....thanks for the insight Terence....
I am very thankful for your reading and commenting...
yes, i did think that the second triplet meant the most, and stories mean the most to me...so i figured i wanted a kinda story there.
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Mango Magnificent penning you have captured hope, and you have capture what hope really is trust faith and thoughts of good excellent
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Thanks Bear!
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I hate the word good, personally, but i couldn't find anything else that would work right there and get it right. :]



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see sometimes the best of us comes out,
our wishes desires, can easily be someone elses however,

our poetic sight will always be reaching and in this case finding
the best in us and everyone



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