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Old 12-30-2007, 09:00 PM
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If I Were An Artist

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If I Were An Artist





Were I a great artist,
and people were canvas,
I’d paint them with kindness,
they’d live on greener grass.

With a pallet full of color,
a magic wand for a brush,
I’d paint a new honor--
that gives the spine a rush.

Were I a fine sculptor,
and the earth was my clay,
I’d mold it as a game,
we’d all be kids and play.

With skills of a sculptor,
and the tools of the trade,
I’d sculpt men of beauty,
there’d be no masquerade.

Were I a conductor
with orchestra in hand,
I’d wave up a symphony--
we‘d skip to the promise land.

With drumming’s of furry,
drowning out screams for war,
Angel’s singing violins--
leading strings-- to heaven’s door.

If I were a wordsmith,
the written word-- my game,
I’d write sweet poetry--
that would set man’s heart aflame.

With a pen full of wonder,
epiphanies to employ,
play would be our living art,
living life would be our joy.

Were I a star rocker
with my lightning guitars,
I’d rock-it to a milky way,
we’d be rolling with the stars.

With amps fully cranked,
and the lead’s all screaming,
the bases blowing out,
Man-- would we be steaming....



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Old 01-02-2008, 01:49 PM
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But you are an artist! Wonderful read, thanks for it.



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If I were a wordsmith,
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I’d write sweet poetry--
that would set man’s heart aflame.


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You just did......fantabulous write! Loved loved loved this! Looking forward to reading more of you!

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Thanks Liisa and Kim,

Glad you liked it and I do look forward to writing more.

Hugs for your new year.

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"With a pen full of wonder,
epiphanies to employ,
play would be our living art,
living life would be our joy. "

Lovely thoughts. We should all live life with such an attitude.



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Some beautiful thoughts, enjoyed the read very much.
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I echo Terence...wonderfully alive and philosophical as well.

With a pallet full of color,
a magic wand for a brush,
I’d paint a new honor--
that gives the spine a rush.


I loved all the verses but this one stands out...lack of honor is one of the bigger things wrong with the world today.

LOVED IT!!

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Thanks Nomad, Terence & Joli,

It would be nice to be able to paint the world the way we want. And I do think we should try. If we don't who will.

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Hi RR, good to see you here! This has some wonderful thoughts.
So alive and full of energy. Loved it from top to bottom!
Excellent write!



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