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Juvenile Baby Dolls
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Juvenile Baby Dolls
All that I see.
Won't play with toys.
She says no to the boys.
She once was a part of me.
I knew that someday that flower would bloom.
Now I'm counting her steps till graduation in June.
So gone are the days she would be sent to her room.
Baby dolls sit in line, still awaiting tea.
The zoo survived the toy lion in a cage, still can't get free.
Puppets on strings.
I recall a time when Pinocchio lied to us....to me.
All that I can see.
Was her then and now she runs with her friends.
Yes, all day long she runs for miles.
Her and her juvenile baby dolls.
O never mind, I can't get mad though.
Growing up is what I'd hoped for.
Just then, she told me"Daddy I Love You."
As she walked out the door-
I knew then she would always be a part of me.
Leaving me with that lying-ass Pinocchio.
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Originally Posted by Curtis Spider Lee
Just then, she told me"Daddy I Love You."
As she walked out the door-
I knew then she would always be a part of me.
Leaving me with that lying-ass Pinocchio.
Hey lil' brother,
This is an incredible write....so much love in this...we have had many conversations...yes. The title captured my attention and is most fitting. I absolutely LOVE this, going into my favorites, excellent rating, and made me a little misty. A Daddy's love for their child / children is radiant through out and beckons to be read and heard. You penned this beautifully and flawlessly. Love ya'.
Kim
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Biography: I am the Spider, my name comes from playing Basketball years ago. I still use it today being 6'6
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Yes Big Sister we have had a many of conversation. I share this one with all the fathers out there who are truly there for there children. As I am for my little lady Jacquetta.
Too many fathers are getting bad raps, there are still some real dads out here. Right Zaac! Thank you Big sister for reading, your kind remarks and rating this work! Much love for ya too!
the last line is a killer lol. i like this a lot. and it reminds me of her cuz she is all girly girl and on the go already and she's only 6. thanks spider
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Spider this is truly beautiful. Sighs they just seem to grow up too fast. It is easier for men because as they age.... they only get more distinguished.... And we women just get old lol. I think I am aging like fine wine.... mellowing ..... becoming oh damn ...inspiration strikes... Thank You
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Thank Zaac for your kind reply. I had you and your little lady in mind when I wrote this one! I'm pleased that you enjoyed it and I thank you for reading and your comment on this write!
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I Thank You for your comment on this write Mysty! LOL!! I love it LOL!! I'm quite sure you're still drop-dead gorgeous Mysty. "I feel you... all down your back and spine" As for me on the other hand... I may well appear to be all tore-up and well taken by wear and tear. Maybe my buddy Zaac can take me around back of the JPIC, to the back 40 and take me out of my melancholy looks!
Biography: Jacquii Cooke is a 32 year old Black Poet from Oak Ridge, Tennessee. As Webmistress of Poetry in Color Forum, she is devoted to the more abstract styles, especially those with a strong feminine voice that center around the topic of redemption and righting the wrongs of past transgressions.
