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A poem for depression.

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Old 08-14-2008, 04:45 PM
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Live for the Moment
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Live for the Moment

I would say to you, to take life easy day to day.
If that is too difficult, live for the moment.

That is all that matters, what is happening in
this time and space.

All of your worries and fears will be allayed if you will believe
in you.

For today is such a small spectrum of your time; which builds upon all other experiences in your journey through life.

What is important is the love that you give to you; to complete
the circle of unending love given to you from God above.
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you might wan to fix the that that
in the verse before the end verse

other than that very well done



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I agree with erikestabrook. The double "that" needs rectifying.

It tends to slow the message a little for the reader and the message is so important, one can not expect anyone else to love them if they don't already love themself.

Apart from that one typo, great effort



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