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Old 08-11-2007, 08:13 PM
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It winks at us, an owl-eye hung in black,
coming back for the young,

who will tell a tale of bright summer stars,
and where Mars might come from.


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It winks at us, an owl-eye hung in black,
coming back for the young,

who will tell a tale of bright summer stars,
and where Mars might come from.


Jerry P. Quinn © September 3, 2003
Jer: Yes, The mighty red planet seems to wink at us at times. The imagery in your poem was right on. Star gazing is so addictive and full of wonderous questions.
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I wrote this poem the night that Mars was supposed to be as close as it will get in my lifetime. thanks for checking it out! so do you know what a toddair byr is?


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toddair byr? Can't say that I do. Please enlighten me.

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