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Old 10-29-2006, 02:14 AM
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Mere Words
Somewhere beyond mere words
lie gestures of the heart
where spirit births desire
and love prepares its art.
Elusive to the mortal mind,
expressions are on hold;
only Angels ere' confess
the echo of the soul.

Each generation plans assault
through lofty vows pursued,
seeking but to claim embers
of what so oft eludes.
Folly follows good intent,
our best love yet acerb
as mortal tongues do contend
to capture love in word.
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Old 10-29-2006, 05:37 AM
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Totally AWESOME!
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Thank you...it is an old one...back when I seemed to make all my work rhyme. Still like to do it...
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Benny! I had no idea that you were such a romantic! I really like the rhymes in this and even the near-rhymes are near enough so that the rhythm isn't thrown off. Nice Write!



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Beautiful flow of words. This poem is good for the heart and mind. Thank you.



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