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Old 12-24-2006, 04:53 PM
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"Mozart at Dawn"

I love all types of music. Here's a classical creation.

"Mozart at Dawn"

Grandeur crescendos
in metronome time,
symphonies sounding
as if right on cue,
break into dawning
like poets to rhyme,
and paint into beauty
on a canvas of blue.

Classical creations,
an ears form of art.
Magickal mornings
will awaken and yawn,
and bring with it
pleasures
to place in the heart;
sunrise and coffee
and Mozart at dawn.


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gorgeous poem Sally, I like the wording and it was splendid



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You have done both worlds very proud in this little piece of paradise. Amazing!!!!!!!

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nice work, Sally...enjoyed very much
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Old 12-30-2006, 04:32 PM
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Thanks so much for your most welcomed comments. I always appreciate the feedback.


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one thing sally you mispelled magical you put a k,
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Hi Erik:


Thanks for checking out the word Magickal.

I totally understand your point. Thank you for your comment.

I spelled it with a "k" on purpose, cuz, there are two meanings and two different spellings for the word magickal. I prefer to spell it with a "k" because of the meaning factor.

Example: When the word magic is used without the "k" it means: a magician performing stage illusions and tricks to fool the eyes.

When spelled with a "k" as in magickal it is used for the paranormal and mystical. A person who is "not evil" but indeed a true magickal being.

Thanks very much for your comments. Always feel free to comment. I am a free spirit and accept all feedback.


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