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Old 06-03-2007, 03:43 AM
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Beautiful penning Painted but also sad when two lovers slowly break apart like the two broken dancers of the music box. awesome heart breaking poem
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Old 06-03-2007, 07:30 AM
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I love this one so much, esspecially the ending, awesome read PaintedDiary!
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Old 06-03-2007, 04:28 PM
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I will hope for tomorrow
but for now
the figures kiss (Good Bye)
but never kiss (Hello)
Wow... I love this poem you wrote some time ago! I think it's an awesome write and needs to be seen again! Yes!! This one feeding on this one as it as fallen into my web and I'm feeding again!! Nice Write!!![/quote]

Hey Spidy ,

Thank you sooo much for bringing this back! That was so sweet of you. Better watch that web, gettin heavy in there! LOLOL Love you lil brother!

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Old 06-04-2007, 02:27 AM
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Wow very nice!
Hmm...there's always a way when there's a will...

how did they fall in love again?



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Old 06-08-2007, 08:36 PM
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Dear Kim (Ms. Painted Diary): OH!! I love the title, so all the words. It is a bit sad, but lovely in all its contents. I was reading all the reviews, and I realized that all came out good in the end. Well, it is so good after all!! Lovely Poem, sweetheart!! Thank you for sharing your sweet talents with us!! Hugs. Fondly, Starry.
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Old 06-09-2007, 02:16 PM
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Kim,

Your ability to use the poets pallet and brush is exceptional.

You set the visual stage

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What happened to the music box
two figures spinning in love
weathered strings
play a dying melody
for you were
the best part of me
you open the curtain

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The music box
only opens half way
the other half
closes more and more
each day
and tell your story

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I will hope for tomorrow
but for now
the figures kiss (Good Bye)
but never kiss (Hello)

The first five lines are my favorites!


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I've heard of but haven't seen, in person, that music box.
I read your poem and was touched by the wistful thoughts.
Really beautiful!
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I've heard of but haven't seen, in person, that music box.
I read your poem and was touched by the wistful thoughts.
Really beautiful!
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Dear Gail,

Thank you so much for taking precious time to read and to comment. (Let alone all the things you are helping me with! ). It makes me misty to read that you were touched, and I am most honored sis. Then I know, I am on the right track. Love Ya!

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