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Old 05-03-2008, 08:52 AM
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MY FAIREST LOVE ~ SONNET

There lies a simple love within mine heart,
Where wealth could never damage nor despoil.
A place where fairest beauty plays her part,
Where trust is built upon pure Eden’s soil.

The dark of yesterday no longer blinds.
Thine eyes now leadeth me into the light.
The dawning of tomorrow brightly shines.
No ghouls nor demons teeth again can bite.

The hand of love caressed my aging face,
Where yesterday no man would dare to touch.
Mine heart once beat within a bitter place,
But through the years I’ve grown to love so much.

Oh fairest love, behold my bleeding heart.
Within your hands a rose’s thorns depart.

© Karen Davies



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Old 05-04-2008, 05:08 AM
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Tender is the night
which takes my lady to flight
holding hearts in skies blue
twinkling beauty upon my dew.

'Tis my smile that reflects
within your eye with no regrets
to hold you there forever more
healing lonelinesses ugly scar.

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Old 05-13-2008, 01:52 PM
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Since my first sonnet, I've really come to appreciate this form. They're a little difficult to write but well worth the effort.
This is just beautiful Karen.



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Thank you Jolie
I've written over 300 now and I plan to write
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Old 05-22-2008, 07:26 PM
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Amazing and wonderful penning Moonchild when written with the love you have and in the right concept make it truly an amazing write I love this poem
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i was spellbound by it moonchild simply amazingly beautiful
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Thank you Tom.
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