Creative TraditionalCelebrating Mother Earth? Seasonal, Traditional & Rhyming poetry posts here. (i.e. sonnet, limerick, haiku & all other poetic forms as seen in the Poetry-Defined section.) A Kyrielle Sonnet
It Is It Is Not Dying That I Fear
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I want to go down in a blaze
Not sitting in some mindless haze
I pen down truth for all to wear
It is not dying that I fear
It is silence within my mind
The lonely moments that I find
Bound by the cords too strong to shear
It is not dying that I fear
And when I linger near the edge
All my hopes and dreams neatly wedged
I shout this out to all who hear
It is not dying that I fear
I want to go down in a blaze
It is not dying that I fear
Mike Carson
5-27-2008
Last edited by Kit Carson; 05-28-2008 at 03:15 AM.
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I think Jet Li would be proud of you and this piece is blazing! You're right you die when you fail to live on the edge and take risks. Without the adventure I would agree that we're sitting in some mindless haze watching Sponge Bob reap all the benefits of wilding out!
powerful penning Kit I too feel that way and I hope that i go down in a blaze of glory before I get to bad great image magnificent wording
handshakes kit
bear
Thank you Tha-Emissary...sadly, so many do.
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Thank you Bear...where did you get that picture? Rotflmao, love it!
Last edited by Kit Carson; 06-02-2008 at 10:32 PM.
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