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Old 03-22-2007, 03:15 PM
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Ocean of Dreams

Oceans of dreams
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I dreamt of the Ocean Last night,
It’s hue is that of my spirit,
As the shimmering moonbeams glistened of the water,
As it sent powerful waves crashing onto the cliffs.
~.
She holds the sparkle of the stars captive
Within the majestic indigo hue,
Concealing the marvelous diamonds deep in her soul
Adding magic to her spectacular blue
~.
The ocean whispered to me,
Her cool breath gently caressed my skin.
And her mysterious spirit began to tempt me,
With stories of storms, beauty and enraged fury,
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Last night I went to her shores,
And cuddled in her calm cool arms,
To be engulfed within her beauty,
As I was mesmerized be her charisma,
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She held me tight and caressed me,
With waves of her blue velvet ,
And I surrendered myself to her,
Always knowing that’s what I'd do.
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I dreamt of the ocean last night
The velvet indigo is the color of our souls.
Watching the sunrise as one.
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I especially lik ethis line of yours
The velvet indigo is the color of our souls
lines like that are perfect to my taste,
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