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Old 02-19-2008, 03:13 PM
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I am firm in field but have no other choice
I hem before you to clear my voice

everything gets useless, kind words cursed
with coming into sight, world gets dispersed

you have prepared chicken for dinner and rice
may the night be long and moonrise twice

deadly black snakes that creep on white
thanks to the scarf so that they may bite

species of flowers with beauty and affection
is the thorny rose with a special attraction

without worldly care, caring for good and bad
one in love here may be labelled as mad.
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Please derive the word 'hem' as this is not the commonly used word with the same spelling.
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very good penning sir. The images were wonderful a pure delight to read
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