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Creative Traditional Celebrating Mother Earth? Seasonal, Traditional & Rhyming poetry posts here. (i.e. sonnet, limerick, haiku & all other poetic forms as seen in the Poetry-Defined section.)

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Old 07-14-2007, 12:59 AM
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Rainbow of Life (Clarity Pyramid Collection)

RED
Anger
In a rage

Agitated state
Blood pumping through veins
Where reckless abandon rules

“Serenity maintains calmness.”


BLUE
Upset
Down and out

Feelings of sadness
Bringing on depression
As it eats away the soul

“Find the true path to happiness.”


GREEN
Envy
Jealousy

Desire to have
Something others possess
Unhappy with what you own

“Be grateful for all you’re given.”


BLACK
Despair
End of light

A darkness spreading
Swallowing up all hope
Stripping life of its rewards

“Keep open the doorway to joy.”


WHITE
Peaceful
Purity

Illuminating
Salvation’s guiding light
Rebirth to eternal life

“Pure as snow, a heart that knows love.”


MOODS
Feelings
Emotions

All represented
By corresponding hues
Forming the rainbow of life

“Learn well to control your colors.”



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Damn Scott! Excuse my language.....but can you get any better! This was top notch, creative, novel, and skillfully crafted! You have mastered this form not just in form, but the layered emotion, and that killer last line! Speechless.......

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Kim, you are excused! It was called for! Damn!Wow doesn't cut it. Some hellacious painting there buddy.



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Old 07-25-2007, 01:36 PM
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Way to Go!

Scott,

What a wonderful collection with an incredible story and moral as well. I'm very happy to see this form takes its shape under your muse. Awesome. I've rated 5 stars!

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MOODS
Feelings
Emotions

All represented
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Forming the rainbow of life

“Learn well to control your colors.”
Thanks so much for honoring the Clarity Pyramid!

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fantastic collection Mate amazing penning
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thanks all for the comments...trying to get back into the sight and get around and view some others posts...thanks again



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Now I know another form of poetry, thanks, it's nice, I'm trying a Haiku Acrostic..
Haha, Means every starting letter of haikus make a acrostic...
Your poem is cool, keep it up!!
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