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Redefine Me (Redesign Me) A Double Acrostic
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Old 09-19-2006, 10:59 PM
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Redefine Me (Redesign Me) A Double Acrostic
Redefine me (Redesign me)

Redefine me redesign me foreveR.
Entice my mind to be someoneE
Devoid of all life’s pain dicovereD
Every time my heart opened up to lovE
For having given everything to otherS
Inside myself, in spite of I
Now consist of only constant regrettinG
Each days first light until it’s setting suN

Measured totals derived from individual’s suM
Erase the past, so once more I can believe.

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very good poem sem
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Awesome! I love acrostics and to find a double as well written as this one is a double bonus! I especially liked your last line, it sums the whole poem up very neatly!

Since you seem to like acrostics and are obviously talented at them, you may want to try my Introduction game along with some of the other word games in the forum games. To get there, click forums and scroll down to the Blushing Lounge section where you will see General Chat and right under that, the sub-forum - Forum Games. Click on Forum Games and it will bring up a page of all of the different word games that members have started. Click on one that you think looks interesting and the first post will explain how it is played. If you want to join in and give it a try - make sure that you go to the LAST PAGE to post your entry.
There are a lot of good ones to join in on and some have as many as 14 pages of replies! Have fun!



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Wow!!! Double!!!! That is a talent all by itself!! Yes, please do visit Ms Tree's Introduction Game, I think you will find it quite stimulating!!! Enjoyed this very much, and look forward to more of your work. Take Care.

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Hey SEMCGL - such a uniquely inspiring write - totally talented the title, the design, the content! Just wow!

Never have I before read or even seen such a "double acrostic" before - This is just fabulous in it's own right/merit!

Then got to the last line and said "Oooooh!" I likes your style very much with this piece! Very nice write - Thanx for sharing it!

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Yes indeed clever and delightful.

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