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Old 07-14-2007, 10:17 AM
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Up the spiny stair case
Around the thoughts I wove
Through the tangled web of lies
Into the haunted hallowed grove

Between the lines I wrote there
Within each word I spoke
Against the grain I danced there
With a Fire to Provoke

After the dancing commenced
Before my world collapsed to cold
Inside I leaked a secret
Outside my story had been told

Since then I’ve change my mind set
Regarding all I knew
Far from love I lie now
Inside emotions would renew

Hehehe. This is my
prepostional poem. Every
line begins with a preposition
or prepositional phrase. :3
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Dear Aste ,

I could not quote a favorite part for I would have quoted the entire piece! This I love...it seemed to get inside of me and my head like there was a purpose just for me. A message just for me some how....enjoyed this immensely!

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Fantastic,,,,Bravo!
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wonderful post...love the flow throughout,,,excellent to say the least...thanks for sharing.



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Ah,
A preposition poem. Very nice. What I like about this is it seems propel the reader in diferent directions. Its almost like a spirit zooming around from one place to another.

Very nice!



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