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A Wannabe Villanelle

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Old 06-25-2007, 07:05 PM
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School House Mystery –

Clumped in the corner, the sight such a mess,
Could the red spot on the white dress be just a stain?
Confess, confess who wore this dress?

They say he had more than one mistress
Then the doctor came in to medicate the pain
Crying, “Did anyone find a witness?”

“It’s just Red Polka Dots that’s what I’d guess,”
The detective was showing what others had fain
Confess, confess who wore this dress?

Next, a preacher ran in quick to find one to bless
But they all stood in awe feeling somewhat insane
Crying, “Did anyone find a witness?”

When a teacher walked by proclaiming a recess
The ring of a bell left a girl with sobs to contain
Confess, confess who wore this dress?

So tell us the truth now, please, before we regress
Or you’ll hear every voice not muffled but plain
Crying, “Did anyone find a witness?”
Confess, confess who wore this dress?


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Old 07-04-2007, 12:55 PM
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Ok so it sucks!



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Old 07-11-2007, 02:49 AM
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haha, No way Jer! This is too cute! Just got a little lost in the wave of posts Nothing ever stays lost for long on JPiC though =)

Haha this is really something though - puts me in mind of an old time schoolhouse, the kind with one room =) All in all, I can only say one thing: fun! haha, thanks for the share, and don't worry - PD and MsJ for sure will find this, among who knows how many others

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OH! I LOVED it!
Cept...if it was supposed to be a villanelle....hehe. I think the 1st and 3rd line of the 1st stanza are the lines that are supposed to be the ends of the other stanzas
BUT I LOVED IT!
ok...it's not GOOD morally...but...but....it was...lol. it was good.



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Old 07-31-2007, 02:53 PM
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anna,

Hey even guys like me make booboos. hehe. Thanks for stopping in and sharing your comments.

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