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Creative Traditional Celebrating Mother Earth? Seasonal, Traditional & Rhyming poetry posts here. (i.e. sonnet, limerick, haiku & all other poetic forms as seen in the Poetry-Defined section.)

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Old 04-30-2008, 12:27 PM
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lifting sleepy heads through rich black soil
emerging seedlings awaken
turning faces to the sun
embraced by morning light
dripping with cool dew
impatiently
infused hope
begins
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Old 05-02-2008, 06:44 PM
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Beautiful Nonet with perfect form too.
Really enjoyed this and will read again.
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Thanks so much for your lovely comments. I truly appreciate them.
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I can picture a garden about which one cares deeply.



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Very nice and it's a good parallel to a person getting up in the morning to start their day.
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Well thank you so much. I really appreciate that you took the time to read the poem. I hadn't thought about the similarity of getting up to start your day, but you are right.
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