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Silken Baby
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Silken Baby
A silken face.
A baby's face.
Moon lights at your door step.
Sweet song voice.
Sweet mother's voice.
Now whispers sweet songs-
as silken baby slept.
Last edited by Curtis Spider Lee; 05-10-2007 at 12:53 PM.
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So says the Man bitten by poetic Spider LOL - a very interesting poem that can be read many different ways CURTIS - I enjoyed this short poem very much.
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Spider, Silken Baby, huh? I'm kinda getting a picture of a spider murmuring and soothing a "catch" in her silken web. lol! Or am I letting my imagination run away? It could just be a soft, luscious little baby in her bed, having a wonderfully peaceful slumber...as they tend to do.
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Dear Spidey ,
Hmmmm...a baby's face, or a baby spider's face....but a spider would moonlight at my doorstep. As I hate spiders...however, for only you did I envision, a baby spider, beig sung to by its hairy mother (lol), and slumbering peacefully. Oh my goodness, what a vision! Loved this poem Spider!!! I also thought the scheme of aa b cc d b was very nice, and added that unique touch to the poem. But you have me lookin' around now for any unwanted silken babies!!!!! LOL Love Ya!!
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Last edited by PaintedDiary; 05-11-2007 at 01:27 AM.
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My o my Nomad, so many thoughts into one web! However they are as enjoyable as your mind see fit to enjoy! Thank You for your "many" thoughts on this poem and sharing them with us all !
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