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A Villanelle

So Says The Sea
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Old 10-19-2007, 11:14 PM
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Icon14 So Says The Sea
Salt water flowing through your veins

Sailor you will never be free

Hear the sea calling out your names

~

You feel it now in your deepest pains

Mind and body tied to the sea

Salt water flowing through your veins

~

So go ahead and claim your fames

Poet you will return to me

Hear the sea calling out your names

~

And even though your lifeline wanes

In my heart you will always be

Salt water flowing through your veins

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We are no longer playing games

Lover bound for eternity

Hear the sea calling out your names

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Sailor/poet forever reigns

With king upon the throne you see

Salt water flowing through your veins

Hear the sea calling out your names

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M.J. Carson

10-19-2007



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Old 10-20-2007, 12:47 AM
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I think she loves you Kit. She needs your voice to venerate her vestige. You are a treasure to the great ocean spirit.

Have you considered taking residence on a yacht?



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Many a time...I would have to hide in the bilges I'm afraid...might be worth it. Thank you very much my friend...you found that quick, lol.



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Hey now Kit,

Nice write... Your choice of form and structure gives it substance and flow............
This was fun to read; nicely put together.....
I enjoyed mucho.............



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I love, love, LOVE the Villanelle ... you certainly did it justice. Thank-you for sharing.
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Dear Kit,

When you scribe about the ocean I can see it. You breath it into your words, you are the sea. This was a flawless Villanelle, and your interpretation of the sea was flawless. I read this several times and went into my favorites Kit. I LOVE your sea poems. I can see the paintings in all of them, you give the sea life in your work and that is amazing,as you are. Love y my friend!

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