Kit Carson

Sun swept visions of love romanced without
The reservations of limits set by
Those who think they know how loud love should shout
Live eternal beyond the deepest sigh

Yellow the rose that grows ‘neath the twilight
Of silvery silken dreamers entwined
By the enchanted blackened moonlit night
Held within the arms of love undefined

The soul of love remains long after star
Kissed nights fade into one crystal vision
A sea of sparkling diamonds drifting far
Beyond the power of death’s dominion

Within the heart there lays a truth unbound
Lives a love that even death can’t uncrown

Mike Carson
7-10-2008

PaintedDiary

Dear Kit,

This is a memorable classic here! Exquisite, beautiful, beautifully crafted, and flawlessly executed. Above all...the love that went into writing this radiates from every word, every line, every stanza. The sonnet is an elegant form and you have made it even more diamond-esque. I cannot select a favorite line and such as it all is like a lyrical tapestry woven from your heart. Bravo Mike. Reminded me of the Old English classics that we were required to read in school...the ones that stand the test of time, like the love you scribe about here. Love it my friend and thank you for sharing it with us.

Kim

Kit Carson

Then...you are saying it works, hunh? Thank you very much...my pen is very strong at the moment and I know where the strength comes from. Thank you for all of your support.

Kit Carson

Then you are saying that it works, right? Thank you very much for all of your support...my pen is very strong at the moment and I know from whence it came.

Bear

beautifully written love poem Kit filled with magnificent scenery, visions, passions and desires. this show the love you have in your heart and soul fantastic penning
handshakes
tom

JolieH

I love the commitment to eternal love - such beautiful words here friend.