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Old 04-21-2007, 09:24 PM
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Southern Skies
Southern Skies
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The alabaster moon is radiant and beautiful tonight,
As it sheds an eerie incandescent beam of light,
I wonder if this cadaverous sight appears,
Before you, as it appears here,
Or whether in the high southern skies,
Does it have a very different image there.
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The stars are lustrous and illuminating,
Seemingly to loom closer to the Earth,
I yearn to visit you and gaze skyward.,
At the magnificent wonders
Clear of northern city’s smog.
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Old 04-22-2007, 07:48 PM
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Wow TOM - This poem is very nicely scribed - I really love the word "alabaster" - just beautiful + I once had a dog - She was just a cutiepie; she was all black with a white spot on her foot. She was a stray that I found in an alley - So I named her Alabaster (I called her Alley Girl) Ah- The irony

Anyway - I found this poem very soothing and calming - reminds of a brilliant Spring night in Tennessee.

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Old 04-23-2007, 01:35 AM
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment Maybe some day Ill get to see a tenn. spring night
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Thomas...this is wonderfully done! I love my southern skies...and felt every one of these words. Great job, muse!
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Thank you so much for your great comment I too love the southern skies even though I have only been able to see a couple of sunsets and sunrises when I visited down in fla. I live in Illinois,
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This felt nice and
calm, as it brought
soothing images
to mind.

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Thank you so much I try to bring a tranquility to all my poems especially my nature poems I am very happy you enjoyed southerm skies
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Love your poem
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I want to thank you for your beautiful poem.More than beautiful its perfect and I love the music of those words and all those amazing images so delicate and strong at the same time-Thank you so much for all that !....



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Thank you so much for this most magnificent comment
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