The Speckled Meadowlark - Poetry in Color Forum
 


Poetry in Color Forum
Donation Goal For Private Hosting 2009
Help us get better hosting = make your donation today!
We Have Received $160 Towards Our Goal Of $750
21.33% Of Our Goal Has Been Reached




Welcome To The JPiC Community.





All times are GMT -4. The time now is 12:31 AM.
Official Forum Language Is English. Translate Below:
Click Here To Join JPiC Forum.

Kewl Stuff JPiC Radio Daily Horoscope JPiC Arcade Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read
    JPiC Portal » Main Forum Index » Poetic Colours » Creative Traditional

Creative Traditional Celebrating Mother Earth? Seasonal, Traditional & Rhyming poetry posts here. (i.e. sonnet, limerick, haiku & all other poetic forms as seen in the Poetry-Defined section.)

The Speckled Meadowlark
this thread has 6 replies and has been viewed 251 times


Post New Thread  Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 07-15-2007, 07:03 PM
  post #1
Forestdawn

Sally Roberts's Avatar

Sally Roberts Is The Original Thread Starter
My Mood:
Real Name: Forestdawn
Last Online: 01-07-2009 01:40 PM
Location: Historical Wolf Creek, Oregon
A/S/L: 52
Join Date: Aug 6 2006
Posts: 733 Threads: 124
Thanks: 0
Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts
Biography: I love living in the country. I get many inspirations there. I'm a 53 years old. Happily married, 19 years. Published poet. and I am Wiccan.
Surfs The Web With:
Instant Message Info Is Private.
The Speckled Meadowlark

I heard a Speckled Meadowlark
up in a tree today,
And when it sang, my heart turned sad
before he flew away.
The path together, you and I,
we walked down side by side,
While holding hands I turned and asked,
"Will you become my bride?"

A bird sang sweetly from above,
the Speckled Meadowlark.
He brought us luck that special day
while standing in the park.
Remembering when our hearts were full
and happiness filled my life,
The love you'd give to me so dear
when you'd become my wife.

But then that day while on your way
to meet me at the gate,
You hadn't come when we had planned,
oh you were very late.
I waited there with all our friends
'til the sun fell in the sea,
A worried look stayed on my face
wondering where you could be.

Then dearest Dan came running in,
his face all filled with pain,
He told us how you swerved to miss
a drunk and hit a train.
The grass still grows up on the hill
where we both loved to go,
I walk up there most everyday,
and you just seem to know.

I've planted flowers by your grave
so you can clearly see,
that these are from the blossom bed,
the one you made for me.
One day I hope we'll meet again
together in the park,
and listen to those songs again
from the Speckled Meadowlark.



Signed By Sally Roberts


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.


Last edited by Sally Roberts; 07-21-2007 at 03:53 PM.
Sally Roberts is offline   Reply With Quote
JPiC Forum Sponsor Links • This Forum is enhanced with content-revelevant advertisings...
JPiC Whole-Post Ad Policy
Whole-Post advertisings are shown only to JPiC Forum For Writers' Guests. Once successfully registered, such ads will not be shown. CLICK HERE to register your 100% FREE JPiC account today and become an active Member of our Community for Poets & Writers! CLICK HERE for advertising opportunities.

Old 07-15-2007, 08:00 PM
  post #2
Contributor

JolieH's Avatar

Real Name: Jolie Harsch
Last Online: 10-23-2008 10:05 PM
Location: CA
A/S/L: 48
Join Date: Jul 3 2007
Posts: 510 Threads: 82
Thanks: 0
Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
Biography: I am a mother of two and a student at CSUSM.
JolieH has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
This is so beautiful, it makes me cry. This will for sure be a famous poem.
One nit:
In the last stanza, did you mean planted flowers ?



Signed By JolieH


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.

JolieH is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-21-2007, 03:57 PM
  post #3
Forestdawn

Sally Roberts's Avatar

Sally Roberts Is The Original Thread Starter
My Mood:
Real Name: Forestdawn
Last Online: 01-07-2009 01:40 PM
Location: Historical Wolf Creek, Oregon
A/S/L: 52
Join Date: Aug 6 2006
Posts: 733 Threads: 124
Thanks: 0
Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts
Biography: I love living in the country. I get many inspirations there. I'm a 53 years old. Happily married, 19 years. Published poet. and I am Wiccan.
Surfs The Web With:
Instant Message Info Is Private.
Thank you very much Jolie:

I am happy to know you enjoyed this poem. It was kinda like an instant thought about a meadowlark and then it transformed from there.
Thanks for noticing the sp er. I edited the word planted.


Blessings



Signed By Sally Roberts


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.

Sally Roberts is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-21-2007, 05:52 PM
  post #4
VIP

erikestabrook's Avatar

My Mood:
Last Online: Yesterday 06:47 PM
A/S/L: 24
Join Date: Aug 6 2006
Posts: 1,693 Threads: 218
Member Blog Entries: 3
Thanks: 21
Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts
Biography: I have my own website now erikestabrook.com, I hope you'll meet me there as well
erikestabrook has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
a very traditional poem, with a solid message and great delivery,
you really couldn't make a more meaningful poem I mean it



Signed By erikestabrook


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.

erikestabrook is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-21-2007, 05:57 PM
  post #5
Forestdawn

Sally Roberts's Avatar

Sally Roberts Is The Original Thread Starter
My Mood:
Real Name: Forestdawn
Last Online: 01-07-2009 01:40 PM
Location: Historical Wolf Creek, Oregon
A/S/L: 52
Join Date: Aug 6 2006
Posts: 733 Threads: 124
Thanks: 0
Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts
Biography: I love living in the country. I get many inspirations there. I'm a 53 years old. Happily married, 19 years. Published poet. and I am Wiccan.
Surfs The Web With:
Instant Message Info Is Private.
Thank You Erik:

I truly sit humbled by your heartfelt words. I couldn't get inspired without poets/writers like you who help me though the days of Writer's block.
I am glad you liked this one.

Thanks again

Blessings
Sally



Signed By Sally Roberts


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.

Sally Roberts is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-21-2007, 06:27 PM
  post #6
JPiC Senior Moderator Extraordinaire

PaintedDiary's Avatar

My Mood:
Real Name: Kimberley D. Robinson
Last Online: Yesterday 05:33 PM
Location: PA
A/S/L: 45
Join Date: Jun 23 2006
Posts: 4,472 Threads: 261
Member Blog Entries: 2
Thanks: 167
Thanked 22 Times in 14 Posts
Biography: Teachers, like candles; consume a little of ourselves everyday, so our students can shine bright.
Surfs The Web With:
Awards Showcase
Contest Winner Award Titanium Friend Award Critique Extraordinaire Award Artistic Award Contributor Award #2 Hall Of Fame Contributor Award 
Total Awards: 7
PaintedDiary has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
Dear Sally,

I do not know how I missed this. This is so beautiful and poignant. A classic! Simply a classic and memorable. When I see a speckled meadowlark, it will never look the same, and I will always remember this storem (story + poem). You are so talented and I can see an entire book of poems in this fashion. This is amazing! I am in aw of you and your beautiful poetic story telling. Blessings to you. Love Ya! An excellent rating!

Kim



Signed By PaintedDiary


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.


Last edited by PaintedDiary; 07-21-2007 at 08:25 PM.
PaintedDiary is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-21-2007, 08:03 PM
  post #7
Contributor

Bear's Avatar

My Mood:
Real Name: Thomas Altier
Last Online: Yesterday 06:40 PM
A/S/L: 53
Join Date: Dec 7 2006
Posts: 1,022 Threads: 192
Member Blog Entries: 1
Thanks: 31
Thanked 18 Times in 18 Posts
Instant Message Info Is Private.
magnificent and beautiful write Sally love and happiness and then sadness elegantly stated
hugs kisses
bear
ps I love this poem
Bear is offline   Reply With Quote
Please Visit These JPiC Forum Sponsors.
The Language of Poetry FormsFanStory.comAllPoetryVids.com
Post New Thread  Reply