Creative TraditionalCelebrating Mother Earth? Seasonal, Traditional & Rhyming poetry posts here. (i.e. sonnet, limerick, haiku & all other poetic forms as seen in the Poetry-Defined section.) For Mr. Spider
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Spider Waltz
I brought this back to dedicate it to Mr. Spider, who is and has been very kind. Hope you enjoy Spider! Hehehe Thank you for joining our Writers Community!!
Spider Waltz
Sweet Sustenance
Geometric pearls
Woven acrobatic silk
Such graceful deceit.
{{{~~**KIM**~~}}}
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Originally Posted by dazamaru
wow...strong visuals...im seeing the "geometric pearls" and the "woven silk"....
this is a nice piece...strong impact to be so short.
great write.
Dear Daz,
Thank you for taking precious time to read and comment. I was pleased to read that you "see" the pearls and silk. This is one of my favorites as I am best known for short writes. Thank you so much again!!
short and extremely visual for me, PD! I really love reading this work of yours...gives me grins all across my face. Thank you!
Dear Benny,
Thank you for taking precious time to read and to comment. Yes, this turned out visually expressive, and I was quite pleased with the outcome Benny. I am so pleased you enjoyed the read.
{{{~~**PD**~~}}}
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Beautiful work on this one, Sis!
Did you know that if you add 3 syllables to your first line and 2 syllables to your second line, that this would become a Sedoka?
- another form you said you couldn't write! LOL!
For someone who "can't" write form poetry, you're doing a dang fine job! LOL!
- Tree.
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Dear Tree,
OMG! I have to try a Sedoka then!!! Thank you for taking precious time to read, and comment. This is one of my favorites as it is short and sweet! Thanks again.
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O Dear Painted One, Thank You for your kind and delicious dedication! Soo tantalizing! How could a Spider ever resist such temptations of words! Simply web shaking!
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