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Old 02-13-2008, 11:57 AM
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Still Dreaming
Still Dreaming

Last night
I had a dream,
and you were there
in a crowded room
singing out loud.

(Dream Poem 2/10/08)



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Hi Jolie! I think this has a lot of charm, and most of all possibilities for each reader's interpretation for it to suit themselves.

Definitely short and sweet!!

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Dear Jolie,

Love the poem. Its like a brief zephyr....with a distinct image and feel, yet open to interpretation and pondering. Very nice.

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Thank You Nomad and Kim,

It's one of those kind of poems that writes itself, and we realize its meaning the next time we read it.

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