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Creative Traditional Celebrating Mother Earth? Seasonal, Traditional & Rhyming poetry posts here. (i.e. sonnet, limerick, haiku & all other poetic forms as seen in the Poetry-Defined section.)

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Old 04-30-2008, 07:20 AM
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What more indeed! I read this several times, it was easy since there's not much there, word wise. But! Image wise? Hooboy! You've created an image I can't get out of my mind!

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Thank you both - I am pleased it touches you
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Beautiful imagery Beki! The poem is tiny and tight...the impact huge and wide-spreading!

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Great lasting imagery Beki and I love the title as well. The brevity of this lil' gem, combined with the content is outstanding. It is lasting indeed!

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Oh, wow, this definitely says a lot and everything it needs to say within three short stanzas and it's very powerful even for how small it is. I really enjoyed this and I think you did a great job with it. You say a lot with so few words and I'm glad that I came across this poem and got to read it. Keep on writing!
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A wonderful and wonderful image BIKILYNN so few words that leaves an everlast image
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