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Old 07-11-2006, 03:09 PM
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Tanka Tanka Tanka
Tanka is good. You love tha Tanka.
This one has no name.


When at last I stop
I hear her,
Tickling that guitar.
I have to wet my lips for a smile.
‘Cause it’s been a while.

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Old 07-11-2006, 03:20 PM
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First thing I though of when I saw the title was Derka Derka Derka... Too much team america for me

I love this one, always have. Makes me want to see her, to hear her...
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Old 07-11-2006, 03:27 PM
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hey yeah!
heheh it does sound like that team america thing lol

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Makes me want to see her, to hear her...
yeah well hopefully, when you close your eyes, you can (hehe lame, but you know )

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ps - that dancing thing is killing me!.....no, really, i fear it may
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Old 07-11-2006, 03:29 PM
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No need to worry, Ill do something magical and it will attack me instead of you
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Such sweet imagery in such a small space. I LOVE IT!!! So Tanka!!!!!!:declare:

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Ah yes - The tanka - 2nd or 3rd cousin to the haiku...

Very nice APPLEJOUS - Descriptive lust-love resides in this poem... Infatuation perhaps? At anyrate thanx for sharing it - beautiful piece!

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Old 07-12-2006, 12:36 AM
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I thought this was such a cool little piece of Tanka. The tone was very playful and fun.

"I have to wet my lips for a smile."

I like that line there.



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applejoes- enjoyed this here immensly artist. a nice end- rhyme chime yeah.
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