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Old 10-22-2006, 05:06 PM
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Thirsty

Thirsty,
So desert dry,
Empty glass way up high.
Slips from fingers, drops to the floor.
Who would have thought it would hold nothing more.
A giant sweep is now in store.
A delay a cry,
So desert dry,
Thirsty.



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Hey SALLY - nice write. I like this form very much and you've done very niceley with it. I shall move this thread for additional comments.

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FYI - for those who aren't sure what the form Rictameter is... CLICK HERE for education

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Cool! I read the poem and MsJacqui's explanation and enjoyed it, lol. I love reading such as this.
Great write, Sally.
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