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Thunder's Journey (kyrielle)
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Dear Tree,
Very good. You seem to have some "issues" with that beloved piece of punct called the apostrophe ! You NEED one in the title, and do not in lightning ! If you had meant lightEning, ie, making lighter, then your apostr would have been OK, but lightning is spelled like that !
Your poem has left me wondering WHAT he'd done to incur that wrath ?
Love
Alan
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Dear Tree,
I am lovin this piece here sister. I was tapping my foot when I read, and when I do that the meter is JUST right! To be humbled by nature is a powerful thing...poor fellow. The subject was interesting, and I love it!!! Keep posting!!!!! Much Love.
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