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Creative Traditional Celebrating Mother Earth? Seasonal, Traditional & Rhyming poetry posts here. (i.e. sonnet, limerick, haiku & all other poetic forms as seen in the Poetry-Defined section.)

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Old 11-03-2006, 06:53 AM
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On this cool clear night I totally submit myself to you
Already knowing for this act the tremendous price I shall pay
Knowing my fate if what others say about you is true
I hope al the hearsay is not true, this I pray.

If what they say is true I just condemned my eternal soul to hell
I really don't care because like the others I'm in love with you
Knowing within the ranks of the undead I shall dwell
For what I do this night I will pay many dues.

As you take me to a place beyond total ecstasy
A thousand different scenarios run through my mind
The sheer passion I feel, I never want to flee
After this my very existence I will have to redefine.

I know I will be the envy of others
As it circulates I have been with you
But from what I understand to another I will never willingly submit to another
My feelings for you shall always be true.

I totally realize what I have willingly done
If I start to develop an unquenchable thirst I don't care
Only being able to go out at night never again seeing the sun
The unholy existence I choose, I did so without a care.
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