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A Pantoum
To Touch The Sky (Revisited)
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To Touch The Sky (Revisited)
To touch the sky
You must keep trying
To remember to fly
And forget that you're dying
You must keep trying
To wear that crown
And forget that you're dying
And never look down
To wear that crown
You must not burn
And never look down
Don't forget to learn
You must not burn
And remember to fly
Don't forget to learn
To touch the sky
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wow...great pantoum...got that jim feeling to it...great job my friend.
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Very high praise indeed! Thank you Scott.
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Dear Kit,
Awesome Pantoum and the message it tells. Thank you for sharing this!
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really cool write, good theme
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Thank you very much Kimberly and Eric, I went ahead and put this one in my book, I like it a lot, too...it has very deep meaning to me.
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Dear Kit,
I came back for another read and
I am glad I did. So much meaning and emotion is woven into this piece Kit...just amazing my friend. I love it. Congrats again on your book
, and I wish you the best and that your gift does indeed Touch The Sky....you are right there. Love ya!
Kimberly
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Hey Kit,
Well done, I am trying to reach it. Uplifting and insightful. And it should go in a book.
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