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Old 11-25-2006, 10:18 AM
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Traces (haiku couplet)

rivers run through the cracks;
clinging to empty rocks,
leaving traces

silent whisperings go unheard
water laps at my feet
I see traces behind me
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Dear Lindamay,

These are quite lovely, and vivid. Put a nice picture in my head, THANK YOU!!! Loved them both. Take Care and thank you for sharing.

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