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The Tranquility of the Forest
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Old 05-05-2008, 11:11 PM
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The Tranquility of the Forest
The Tranquility of the Forest
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I desire to be in the forest
A place that’s so serene and tranquil
To be Alone with Mother Nature
To observe the Maker of our world
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I yearn to withdraw from the city
A place polluted with the a tense nervous energy
And living a life with the cities frenzied velocity
That’s ravaging the quintessence out of me
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I crave to be quickly transported
Going on a journey back in time
To a unostentatious life
With a slower, simpler existence
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I long to be in the forest
Gathering new energy from the wilderness
Rejuvenating my anguished heart
Letting my soul soar in the lofty tangerine sky like an eagle
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I wish to be in the presence of Mother Earth
Hearing her gentle voice calling me
Hearing the call of the majestic eagle
Listening to the "ancient ones"whispering in the breeze
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I’m in the solace of the colorful forest
Beneath the canopy of a picturesque sky
Where my heart and soul are at peace
And my spirit can soar the mountaintops with an eagle
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I be out there flying with you. Nice one, I could feel the emoting of emotion in this.

A cool breeze.

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Thank you so much for the great comment and for stopping by to read my poem Ill see you in the heavens circling around and drifting on the cool breeze
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Incredible Bear,
you've penned such a beautiful escape.


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Thank you so much Jolie for this incredible comment and thank you for reading my poems
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I desire to be in the forest
A place that’s so serene and tranquil
To be Alone with Mother Nature
To observe the Maker of our world
I feel the tranquility just reading this!

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I crave to be quickly transported
Going on a journey back in time
To a unostentatious life
With a slower, simpler existence
I've felt the same yearning, but have come to the realization that even though it looks like a tranquil time then, it had it's own problem.

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Listening to the "ancient ones"whispering in the breeze
I read this and thought of when I was in my hammock last summer and heard the same whispers!

Beautiful poem, as usual.

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Gail thank you for this great and wonderful comment its nice to know there is someone else that felt what I wrote
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G'day Thomas...
When I lived in Gippsland, I spent many hours blending in amongst the pristine scrub.
You are right...if there is a heaven on earth it is being amongst nature as it is meant to be.
Enjoyed your poem mate.

Lindsay
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