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Old 11-15-2006, 03:04 AM
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She reaches- her arms stretched, open and wide. Giving praises to the sky, they provide her the light she can not be denied. Her branches are strong; passed on by those who stood before her. She proudly stands, the best of her kind- or as if, she were. Her smile, you can see it, more noticeable than the rest. This tree is rare, she represents beauty at its best. The birds and animals, to them, she is of great worth. For this tree is special, planted with love, by Mother Earth.



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Old 11-16-2006, 07:08 AM
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VERY well done!
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Old 11-16-2006, 10:23 PM
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Thanks- it's hard to get feedback on threads- I appreciate the luv. I buddied u, hope u don't mind.
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Old 12-10-2006, 03:28 AM
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How the heck did I ever miss this???!!!! LOL!
V- you will understand why I am LOL - it is because my real name is TREE.
Your words are absolutely beautiful and I love the artful presentation of them!



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Old 12-10-2006, 04:00 AM
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Her branches are strong; passed on by those who stood before her. She proudly stands, the best of her kind- or as if, she were. Her smile, you can see it, more noticeable than the rest. This tree is rare, she represents beauty at its best. The birds and animals, to them, she is of great worth. For this tree is special, planted with love, by Mother Earth.

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Wow! Your name is Beautiful- 1st I ever heard for a person. I bet this is a reflection upon U. So, 4 U...I will dedicate this poem 2 U. Glad U like it...Who would have thunk? LoL.. I'd write this, then meet U.

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Old 12-10-2006, 05:41 AM
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very well-expressed, good detail and imagery



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The metaphor is captivating with it's praise to Gaia and it's tone of universality without catechism.
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v3 this poem was very good The image it presents is uplifting and it honors tree in the process very good poem and also I like the format you used in presentation of it



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