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Old 12-23-2006, 03:38 AM
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Understand You

You are God’s greatest gift to me
You always encourage me to succeed
Very seldom do we disagree
You give me almost all I need

You take care of the little things
That I so thoughtlessly forget
How else could I live like a king
To you I owe a great debt

You’re such a powerful creature
Who can either destroy or uplift your man
At times I may find you to be my teacher
As a wise woman you have a definite plan

For all the wonderful things you do
I truly love, but it’s hard for me to express
Just the mere thought of you
Accentuates my happiness

Where would I be without you?
This is your chance to witness true praise
At times I may not have a clue
Yet your inner beauty truly amazes

I realize no other pleasure’s so intense
Than the intimacies between woman and man
And the anticipation keeps me in suspense
For you have me in the palm of your hands

At that moment, the look in your eyes
Gives me the signal to proceed
With those things we fantasize
Based on what we’ve agreed

You are more than just an instrument of pleasure
Whose only purpose is to answer to my sexual commands
Your value is a thing I could never measure
Will you forgive me for making such outrageous demands?

To you a debt of gratitude is owed
For me not recognizing your worth
I appreciate those times you didn’t explode
You could’ve brought me hell on earth

Motivator, cheerleader, educator, comforter, freak
It’s your strength I’m always drawn
Emotionally you’re not at all weak
And the list goes on and on

You are one of God’s most precious creations
There is so much beauty in all you do
I’m so blessed for our situation
Please help me understand you
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Old 12-25-2006, 01:58 AM
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Ahh, yes...always sing the song of love to your spouse...let them know over and over what they should know...it is always great to hear these.
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Well that ought to put you in the good books Ron.
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Ron, from a woman's perspective - it is not only great to hear this (over and over), we NEED to hear this! But it won't get you into the good books if you are writing it from the doghouse! It sure is a great start though!



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Dear Ron,

Very well executed, and the content was as beautiful, as the woman you speak of.

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