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Creative Traditional Celebrating Mother Earth? Seasonal, Traditional & Rhyming poetry posts here. (i.e. sonnet, limerick, haiku & all other poetic forms as seen in the Poetry-Defined section.)

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Old 05-29-2008, 02:57 PM
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The View
The View
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The vista is a feast for the eyes
A brilliant atmospheric fantasy
As the sun leisurely peregrinates
Over the horizon
In the resplendent colorations
The sky mutating from the mid-night blue to
A vivid golden-orange and a radiant blue
With white clouds
The crimson altering between light and dark
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As night languishes into dawn,
Making way for a new day
I see the luminous greens, the fiery red,
Luscious lavender blossoms
I wish could halt time just for a few moments
So I could absorb and toast this beauty
This newly created beauty within my sight
So that I may remember nature's beauty
In the coming winter
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Old 06-02-2008, 05:31 AM
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A nice picture drawn however some lines are made too long.
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Thank you so much Mohammas Ilyas
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You capture the colors beautifully Thomas and all the
images were very lovely throughout this piece.
I really love it! Great job with this delightful write!



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thank you so much my sweet love for your great comments
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G'day Thomas...
You have written a great picture here of the view you witnessed. I can only imagine how it changes in the winter. I don't think I've ever seen snow.

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image the first thing you wake up to is pure white everything trees ground house tops roads everything and also image a tempature around 30 degrees far. or colder
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