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Old 07-14-2007, 03:26 AM
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Waiting For the End (villanelle haiku collection alexandrine couplet)
Waiting for the end
As the time passes me by
Death my only friend

His ear I do bend
Wishes from my mind now fly
Waiting for the end

No longer pretend
Do not even want to try
Death my only friend

Heart that will not mend
As slowly my feelings die
Waiting for the end

No payments to lend
For a weakened soul to buy
Death my only friend

Give up my ghost, my spirit, to the grave I send
Looking forward to being swept up to the sky
Waiting for the end
Death my only friend



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great poetry here,
you can't ignore the power of those lines



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Dear Scott,

You have outdone yourself with this piece! I am speechless. Everything about this piece is of the highest caliber and executed flawlessly. Superb poem Scott! Just

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Showoff! What Kim said doubled! Great job my friend!



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Hey! this is great...

Although, I hope you're not in too big a hurry to spend time with your friend. LOL
We enjoy reading your poems.



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Thanks to all of you for the comments...glad that you enjoyed reading because i certainly enjoyed writing it.



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