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Old 07-11-2007, 11:38 PM
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Tools of flight

Icarus did try
But found out the hard way
As the wax melted and he fell

“It takes more than wings to reach God.”



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Old 07-11-2007, 11:49 PM
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Absolutely stunning Scott! I've rated you 5 stars dude!
Totally Awesome!


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Dear Scott,

This is awesome, and is the first poem I have read about Icarus.... I believe the Clarity was the perfect choice for this poem as well. I remember him flying too close to the Sun, and his artificial wings melting, yes. That last line stands out and is a brilliant pinnacle of the piece. Masterfully done Scott! Excellent rating as well!

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Old 07-12-2007, 12:00 AM
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thank you both for the wonderful comments and the rating...i truly appreciate it...i've been holding on to this one for a week or so...i thought i had posted it here already...then remembered i had posted it on my 360 page...again many thanks for the comments



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About time you brought this winner over here! LOL, I forget what is where also! Very fine indeed!



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thanks my brother...i appreciate the comment...owe it all to you for hooking me up with this format and forum...broadening my horizons you are...thanks kit



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That's really cool. I commend you on your use of quotes.
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