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Old 12-06-2006, 08:59 PM
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The Winter Wolf




Silently lopes the winter wolf,
beneath snow-laden trees,
following frozen rivers as
alone he braves the breeze.

His fate is now a certainty,
an end that none may tell;
and though he hunts, he hungers not,
expecting naught as well.

He listens to a distant howl
across a wind-swept lake,
a feast of tasty caribou
of which he’ll not partake.

With a pace that’s ever slowing down,
his vision’s grown opaque,
though memories still flicker on
of kills he once could make.

He's shared long nights in joyful howls
beside a strong grey mate,
but hunting’s made him weary now -
his day has become late.

As snow yet falls in softest flakes,
his thoughts are growing dim.
Peaceful sleep is gently waiting,
as night descends on him...

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Old 12-06-2006, 11:06 PM
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Amazing work! Love the way you presented this poem...visual to say the least! Besides, I love wolves...lol. I loved this work very much. Thank you for posting this.
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very visually scribed, a solid opening stanza, told with a deep sense of story, enjoyed the read



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What a wonderful write!!! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Just the word Wolf in the title captured my interest because that is my clan. TY for posting and for the pic - awesome!



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I like the ending emmensely and wolves are good to write about,
seems like you had two lines of visuals folowed by a line about the wolf
twas executed well



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Thank you for your comments. This poem was a bear, it just wouldn't happen; I had almost given up on it when a few lines finally worked.
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Thank God you did not give up! Brilliant dear poet, simply brilliant!!!

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