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Old 04-16-2008, 10:55 AM
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In the Woods

In the Woods

We're finally there,
you and I,
underground
in the woods
where ants gnaw roots.
They're ugly, creepy,
have no eyes.
~
But we don't
mind.
We're having tea,
and I have a new hat.
The grass is mowed,
and I'm sleeping
near where the babies
look out.
~
You brought your cap
and baseball bat.
I can catch
In my mitt,
and throw
like a girl,
some.
~
On the green grass
above the roots,
In the clearing
near Hansel and Gretel's cottage.
~
Those mean boys
Can't find us,
Nobody knows about this place.
There's sun all year,
and the ants have no eyes.



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Old 04-20-2008, 08:20 AM
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Wonderful images Jolie.
This is playful and I enjoyed immensily.
I can't believe no one's commented yet
so I will be the first. I like the parts
about the ants....hehe Well done!



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Thank you Karen.
Ants can a nuisance at any event.



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Dear Jolie,

Haha! I loved this and you have a unique way of writing that simply draws us in and when we are, it's heavenly. I love this whimsical, playful, and delightful poem! I read several times and each time my smile emerges. The lines about the ants are classic! Thank you for posting Jolie! Hope you had a splendid Birthday! Love ya!

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Thanks Kim,

I had fun with this one.



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