Oh Ms Jacquii....I LOVE THIS! It was new, fresh, and and yet played with your abstract side This is FIERCE! LOL

Your one liners such as.... an ebony avant-garde channeling...oh my goodness...awesomeness.

Thank you sooo much for responding to my challenge! You have definitely set the bar and as I said in Chat...uhhhh...made me start over! LOLOL

Who would of thought...Human Hair and Black Safety Pins!?!?

Love the title also Ms. Jacquii!! .....I will share mine soon!

Kim

msJ this was fantastic

Thanx YAWL - it's my first poem in quite some time actually - Soooooo I'm very happy you like it! Thanx for the challenge too KIM - I'll be looking forward to your post AND E-DIZZY's post and others' response to your challenge as well!

Jacquii.

Mine is coming.....Ms Jacquii you set the bar with another brilliant piece! I came back for probably a fifth read...lol....I printed this out and hung it on my wall! Fantabulously Fierce!......lol

Kim

Ha! I had another read meself and I do very much like this write of mine.
I thank ya very much MS KIM for your lovely comments and happy you like it too!
Now - I'm looking forward to your write AND ERIK's write AND everyone elses write!
It seems incredible to me that I'm the only one who has thus responded to this challenge

JAcquii.

Truly ASTOUNDING.... Ms Jacquii I am eternally in AWE of your poetic brilliance. You quite poetically....... with your words ...... described.... a gothic queen. I didn't need the picture to see what you had written. I saw it in my mind. Truly Exquisite work Ms Jacquii.


Love Mysty

Wow! Thank you very much MS MYSTY - I KNEW you'd like this piece. I'm so happy you like it - and yes - I didn't need the pic either - I had it in my mind's eye somehow and it was interesting to see that that EXACT picture was captured in the poem. Gothic Queen indeed

Jacquii.

ps - now time for YOU, MS N & KIM and everyone else to scribe to the challenge!
I'm looking forward to it - there's so many different styles - so many different writes that can come out of this challenge.